fiona1964
Posts : 45
Join date : 2011-08-15
Age : 60
Location : Glasgow Scotland UK
 |  Subject: Our Night  Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:07 am | |
| Taking your hand
Fingers to my lips
I want to love every inch of you
Taste every part of your body
As if I can drink your loves blood
Through your very pores
I want to get lost in your eyes
Consumed by your kiss
Set my body on fire
Quench the fire in my blood
With sweet caresses
Touch my soul with your passion
Lay down beside me
Feel my body crying for you
Let's get lost in each other
Touching, exploring, tasting
We will exceed passion, go beyond bliss
For this is our night
Want me, like no other
Need you, like the air that I breathe
Together, one mind, one soul
Fused in the heat of passionate love
Existing in this moment
Forever
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Spellarella
Lifer
Posts : 3905
Join date : 2009-08-16
Location : Peeking out of a drain.
| | Subject: Re: Our Night Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:31 pm | |
| Can't deny its good. but for me it doesn't flow right. The weave of the emotion is rushed and stop start. | |
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