fiona1964
Posts : 45
Join date : 2011-08-15
Age : 60
Location : Glasgow Scotland UK
 |  Subject: Expressions of pleasure  Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:06 am | |
| Sleepless night of unforgettable moments
Sexual tension, sinful pleasure
Naked bodies in a tight embrace
Aching with a burning desire
Passionate kisses on soft moist lips
Exploring tongues, sensual licks
Stimulating raging, heated passions
Lustful moans, grinding motions
Caressing between parted thighs
Warm moistness, silky flesh
Firmly gripping and stroking
A hard throbbing shaft
Legs entwined, back arched up
Entering with incredible sensations
Breathing quickens, every thrust
Penetrating faster deeper
Bodies trembling and quivering
With each rhythmic thrust
Breathless climax erupting
In wave after wave of ecstasy
Expressions of pleasure
Moments shared together | |
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Spellarella
Lifer
Posts : 3905
Join date : 2009-08-16
Location : Peeking out of a drain.
| | Subject: Re: Expressions of pleasure Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:35 pm | |
| Good concept but again for me it don't flow right. Jitters a bit. If you think of the poems aim, the slow build up to the climax, the words don't flow the same way, its disjointed.
Jeez I am sounding now like a poetry pooper. I couldn't do it for toffee. | |
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